Congratulations to Amanda, Chloe, Cole, Emma and Janet. Their wonderful winter haikus have won them each an eStore exclusive Aquarius Retriever Secret Code!
Read their winning entries below.
Long icicles hang
Shimmering like the fresh snow
The whole world glitters.
- Amanda
All the leaves are gone
Trees are blanketed with snow
Laughter can be heard
- Chloe
Snowflakes are falling,
Icicles are hanging cold,
Winter is calling.
– Cole
Snowflakes floating down
I shiver in my big coat
All of us are cold
– Emma
Snows erase the land
A white page waiting for spring
To colour new life.
- Janet
weirdly enpough, i think i made the poem made by Amanda, although i never got a code……. what should i do? im almost positive i did!
this is very important
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a…k? Huh? What do you mean?
Are we going to do are comments on the newest page or the first one?
I love Janet’s poem! It’s so pretty! XD
those are not haikus, sorry. A haiku is suppose to have five sylabols in the first and last sentences and seven in the middle……………..these are all nice…but they are not correct……..i know, i just done a leeson on poems in school……………….sorry…. here is a winter haiku
As the first flake falls
We gather around for warmth and watch
Winter has cast her spell
Fishier fish oh I hope they are posting your comments maybe it’s like blufadoodle and they wouldn’t post your comments.
I wish I would have won! It’s so cool and i can’t use estore. Mine said:
Snowflakes falling down
They say catch me if you can
Join the webkinz cheer
Nice but still not right………….