By Cowabelle Cowoline and Roberta Rabbit
Hi Webkinz fans! Roberta and I have decided to work together and try our hand at writing our own story. We’ve been thinking of the best way to do this so we thought we’d discuss the overall plot of our story and figure out the beginning, middle and end, and then each take turns writing parts of the story. We chose to do a story about a trip to the spa with some unexpected consequences.
I’m going to start.
Cowabelle: Mrs. Cowoline (that’s my mom!) was thrilled. She was planning to take a break from her taxing job running Kinzville Academy and enjoy a restful retreat at the spa.
Roberta: Mrs. Cowoline packed her favorite things and headed over to the travel agency to book her trip. Of all of Mrs. Cowoline’s belongings, her most treasured item was a beautiful crystal ring that had been a gift from her beloved daughter, Cowabelle.
Cowabelle: Mrs. Cowoline’s trip to the spa was a great success. She returned to her job at the Kinzville Academy feeling contented and relaxed. That was, until a couple of days later when she made a disturbing discovery.
Roberta: Mrs. Cowoline realized that her ring was missing! She was beside herself. She searched her home and office thoroughly, but there was no sign of the ring.
Cowabelle: When she realized that the ring was truly missing, Mrs. Cowoline had a terrible thought. Could it be possible that one of the students at Kinzville Academy was a thief?
Roberta: But Mrs. Cowoline dismissed this idea immediately. She trusted the students at Kinzville Academy implicitly. She must have dropped the ring when she and Cowabelle were walking through the park.
Cowabelle: With a heavy heart, Mrs. Cowaline prepared to tell her daughter the sad news. As she was walking up the stairs to Cowabelle’s room, the phone rang. It was Debbie Dragon from the Travel Agency.
Roberta: Debbie said, “Oh, Mrs. Cowoline, I’m so glad I caught you! One of the staff at the spa found a ring by the mud bath and we think it might be yours.” Mrs. Cowoline suddenly remembered – she had been so worried about getting mud in her ring, she had removed it and carefully placed it next to the mud bath.
Cowabelle: When Mrs. Cowoline arrived at the Travel Agency, she happily placed the ring upon her finger. Immediately she felt as if a weight had been lifted from her.
Roberta: Mrs. Cowoline was so relieved to have her ring back, she decided that this was even better to a trip to the spa. She had never felt so relaxed!
THE END
then i say hi
anyone want to be my freind i am bratzz1
hey moon star want to be my freind i am Bratzz1 u helped me with finding the first clue a while ago
Sure!! I’ll add both of you! Cocoa200104? I like it!! ( No capital ”c” right? ) Bratzz1, I’d love to be your friend. Again, I am 1000Silverstar. -Moonstar♣♥♣
ih! moonstar will you be my friend? my user is cocoa200104:)
Since this is friendship month, Moonstar, will you be my friend? Because you seem to be a nice person that is very nice and intelligent. Could you be my friend on Webkinz? My name is karenkate :)
Thanks Karenkate! I would love to be your friend. I’ll add you, my username is 1000Silverstar. -Moonstar♣♥♣
Nice story. Pretty creative too.
FORGET MY LAST COMMENT I WON!! :D
What a cute story! I like story’s of cowabell and roberta! ~kinzgal :)
I like the story.
Cool.
my mom forgot her purse on a plane once
she got it back, though :)
Funny Puppyluvver. -Moonstar♣♥♣
did ur mom ever find her purse again? my mom would freak out if that happened.
hey can someone help me with the treasure hunt?
i have the first clue but i cant find the sencond.
check contests page if you cant find the treasure hunt
Yeah i need help too. I’ve looked everywhere and still can’t find the second clue.
i can help i’m on clue 4! – snowcares
Can I help? I finished the tresure hunt in littertely, 3 min. Just tell me what the clue is, I forgot! -Moonstar♣♥♣
HEY MOON STAR GO TO PAGE2
Hi Moonstar,
I went to Coming Soon. It was literally the first place I went to look for the next clue, but I can’t find it there. Can you tell me where to look?
i can help! i finished the treasure hunt in about 2 minutes, no lie! :mrgreen: i’m not bragging either. so if your on the first clue, your supposed to go the the ‘News Blog’. then you click on ‘Coming Soon’. if you need help on other clues, just let me know! :lol: friend me at pinetoparizona349 ;)
the second clue is…? And then I can help you!!! Friend Request me, it’s… whinnery
Thanks!!! I’ll go searching right now!!! :D ;)
This is cool, I agree. -Moonstar♣♥♣
Hey Moonstar would you be my friend? You are a super nice person! I’m LillyLuvie on
Webkinz. ~LillyLuvie* :)
Sure! You seem like a really nice person too, I havn’t seen you do anything wrong in your comments! My username is 1000Silverstar. -Moonstar♣♥♣
Thanks so so so so much! LillyLuvie
This is cool!
This is a very nice story! ~LillyLuvie* :)
I like the story!
AWESOME STORY